why do i wish so
to be away from all things
i crave only sleep
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treading so softly
on another's trodden path
i've nothing to add
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don't look at me now
i am not quite ready yet
my mask is not placed
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i'm treading water
sculling hands, softly i float
not far from under
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i'm not a huge fan of haikui. or at least, not mine. even though they are aesthetically pleasing in their visual form and their isochrony....they still just seem...lacking...
rm
couldnt agree more....I tried to write some the other day, but they never feel complete and i want to make them 10 lines long.
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