Friday, August 17, 2007

ennui

to be thrown and stoned
by the place you call home
always the case in America
for a mind overgrown

seems to takes eons
for the crowd to wake
and its usually too late
to get back what they take

folding you into a box so clear
trying to turn u into something
they dont fear

trying to make things foreign
even when they are not
makes me feel those brains
are the size of a microdot

6 comments:

Florizel Polixenes said...

I know i have posted like 10 times in the past two days, but my job is boring and it requires me to sit in front of a computer screen all day long.

The Riverman said...

bro....that's the point of this whole project. writing is, in general (to me, anyway), a cathartic experience. this blog is an outlet, a release valve.

post on, my friend, post on...

rm

Florizel Polixenes said...

true, true, true.........so wheres san man in all this. He must not be working today, or something.

The Riverman said...

hey bro, would you mind helping me out a little with this one? i think it's a great piece, but i know i'm not getting its whole meaning.

rm

Florizel Polixenes said...

Hokay, basicall this was not written about anything i have experienced. It is directed at the mentality that has tormented all great artists that are from AMerica, and that are true geniuses, visionaries, etc. Ennui being a french word that means something in the realm of angst, a struggle. I just was thinking about how so many great artists in America never make anything of themselves while they are alive or producing their best work, and it made me depressed. This is what came out. The last stanza that states" trying to make things foreign even when they are not" is meant to symbolize how, in america, people who dont understand something, even if its a concept firmly established in their realm of existence, blow it off as bullshit, or unamerican.

The Riverman said...

very nice...i get it now, fully.

rm