burning up my brain are thoughts
your thoughts
why????
I cant feel you any more than i can see the
breeze
but i listen to your shit
your dumb shit
and for what, my sweet?
WEHELLLLLL....thats it, eh?
now i remember
a night of wrestling sublime
can leave you here
though
its never enough for me to really open
my ear.
3 comments:
i definately like this. partly, i'm sure, because it's so relatable. if this is about what i think it is. pointless relationships, worth their trouble only for the physical? am i close?
let me see...i've got a poem of similar meaning around here somewhere...
Once again, my friend, your analysis is dead on. That is exactly what it is about.
very nice. glad i was able to catch it. and again, this is just so terrible relatable. i think my latest post, "atlas shrugged, and so did i" and one i'm about to post, "brandie wine" express sentiments similar to what you did here. i wrote atlas... in, summer of 2000 i think. and i wrote brandie... oh...shit...i guess 98. actually, you know who it's about. should be an easy guess, given the title...
rm
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